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For my three minute video, the areas i did good on was addressing my ikigai and utalizing logos and and ethos. i gave statistics for obesity rates in America, but children and adults, and was able to connect to one of my stakeholders who was a registered dietitian to help make a plan. Some things I can improve on is getting better visuals and expanding on why obesity is an important problem. Also I need to connect to more stakeholders like midpacifc parents and their kids, staff at midpacifc, and the sudexo manager.

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